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| Two or three characters are usually
enough for a short story. Here's how to make the characters sound real: Give them suitable names. For example: Pirates: Captain Peg-Leg, Scar-faced Bill, Sly Sam, One-eyed Pete Astronauts: Commander Ben Lewis, Assistant Commander Buzz Owens, Captain Tilly Jones Don't just use your friend's names in a story! Describe what they look like and how they move. For example: A wizened old man shuffling about the house in slippers. A giant, hairy, orange caterpillar creeping slowly along. A ten year old girl, rather small for her age, skipped merrily along the street, her long fair hair flying in the wind. |
Try to show
their personalities in the things they do, for example: Careless - always breaking or losing things Lazy - never wants to do anything, finds quicker ways of doing things Coward - nervous, hides behind the others, stammers and stutters Competitive - tries to do things better and faster, wants to win Posh - Talks very properly, snooty, thinks better than everyone else Try to show how they feel using adjectives and adverbs, for example: tired, excitedly, grateful, angrily, happy, sadly, curious, worriedly, relieved, nervously Write what they say and what they think. For example: " I'm sure I'll be able to fix the spacecraft." At that moment she believed herself. |
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